As you start to get my feedback, having had a week off, you need to seek out peer feedback as well.
The directions are posted on the left. Students still taking this class for credit are listed so you don't bug former classmates who are now working or offline.

DO NOT RESOLVE THE COMMENTS until after May 13, so that I have 2 days to actually look at your drafts again. REMEMBER to share the peer edited version with me on or before May 11.

WARNING: Late submissions will not get points, but the activity is still required for college credit. Don't fall into that trap.